Friday, 17 May 2019
THE FAMILY
One day there was a family and the love each over.There names were RICKY BOB JEFF JAMES. But one day they had stolen a boat. An they had being going around in Africa and one day the people had found then. But they had called the cops and it was a high speed chase on water. an bob the little boy was young so he didn't know what was happening so Ricky had taking over. An he crashed and they had made a run for it and so they had being running for hours. An they had climb a tree and so they drop down and they chop down trees and so they made a house. An it look so cool and so they made a shower out of bamboo and so they had to find food and the people had spotted Ricky and they had guys and they had shot Ricky and then the dad yelled out RICKY!!!! And so they had found the family so had ran for a couple of hours again and camp out and the family had spotted them and then the dad had being spotted and they got the dad so they ended up getting taken to jail. An the mum ended up finding what was happening and so the mum found wires and so they had a tracker and so the mum left the little baby in the forest and so the people who were looking for the mum they just found the kid and so the mum ended up losing the people so they just gave up. So the kid got taken away so when the had got out of jail then the dad got out and so they got together and so they ended up making another baby and so they keep trying to leave Africa so they were so close and the people got the hole family. An got shift to another country and so they stop stealing and enjoy there life. Forever and forever THE END
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ReplyDeleteThe story matched the plan. but i was confused a lot during the story and the plan. I got your point and i enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteit was good you followed your plan but at times it did not make sence.
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