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Friday, 16 August 2019

summer is the best

Summer is the best season of the year because you can go to the pools with out being cold. An you could have ice cream when is’s hot and you could go to the river you could go to the beach you could go for a run you could spend time with your dogs on the beach. You could spent time with your friends but the thing I don't like about summer is when you at school and it’s to hot. But when its summer and it’s cold we would just put on a fire and then you could have a milo and you could go to the pools with your friend all girlfriend and you could go some where and you could go in the spa pool and when it’s to hot you could go and play some basketball and you could just stay inside.

1 comment:

  1. Rongotai, you have identified some really good reasons for why Summer is better than Winter. For your next piece of writing, try and split your ideas in to paragraphs, with one idea per paragraph.

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